So this Illustration depicts myself with my personal characters in a style I’ve been experimenting with in PhotoShop. I was thinking of making commissions to start making myself a little money for outing expenses or other things. So I was wondering on what you guys think about these stylistic designs and whether they would look good for the style of commissions. Or if I should make any changes and the best ways I could manage and complete commissions. Please let me know what you think!
Characters belong to myself: Dsoulsby. 

These are my characters in one image but are not overlaping. 

Self portrate/ characterised depiction of myself. 

My personal Character, 

My personal Character Meco the mouse. 

My personal Character Speedy the Dragonfly. 

My personal Character Atlas the Moth. 

These are a few of the characters that I want to present in a personal story, Characters with unique and unusual abilities. These characters would have verious personalities from overaly confident, to extremely shy or vague, The characters would also have many obsticals thrown at them that they will need to learn how to tackle. Not only physically, but mentally too. To save a beloved friend whos' broken mind has turned them into the monster they was so afraid of. I want to make this story into an animated feature or series with great detail, story driven messages and secrets. This animated feature/series would have elements of crude or playful humour to themes of mental awearness and cartoony like aspects. a huge inspiration of some of the ideas comes from the film "who framed roger rabbit" Directed buy Robert Zemeckis.