For this first suggestion, I decided to show the accumulation of things that the narrator won't be able do see because he is dead...
For the second suggestion, I worked on the first words of each line, which are "I won't see anymore".
Using the leaflet and paper cut, the reader can't see the hole poem and has to handle it to discover the lines.
The reader becomes a participant in the poem. And it's a characteristic of the contemporary poetry.
